Eliot was persuaded to alter the passage.

埃利奥特被说服对该段修改。

You must indent the first line of a new paragraph.

新起段的首你必须缩格书写。

Footnotes illuminated the difficult passages of the text.

脚注阐明了中难解的段。

He had done most of the writing and rewriting himself, reworking key passages again and again.

大部分的写作与修改工作都是他自己完成的, 并一再修改了主的段。

The whole passage could be cancelled.

整个段都可删去。

The parlance pressed aforetime, ten inside art gallery arrive this comes to an end for the time being.

按旧时的说法，十里画廊到此告一段。

Typesetting: Show your translation in clear paragraph – with a blank line between 2 paragraphs, and underline or overstriking words according to the source document.

明确你的译的分段——两个段之间用空格隔开（改为“将你的译晰的段形式展示——2段译中间空开一”），根据原给重点词汇加粗或加下划线。