Eliot was persuaded to alter the passage.

埃利奥特被服对该段落进行修改。

You must indent the first line of a new paragraph.

新起段落首行你必须缩格书写。

Footnotes illuminated the difficult passages of the text.

脚注阐明了文中难解段落。

He had done most of the writing and rewriting himself, reworking key passages again and again.

大部分写与修改是他自己完成, 并一再修改了主段落。

The whole passage could be cancelled.

整个段落可以删去。

The parlance pressed aforetime, ten inside art gallery arrive this comes to an end for the time being.

按旧法，十里画廊到此告一段落。

Typesetting: Show your translation in clear paragraph – with a blank line between 2 paragraphs, and underline or overstriking words according to the source document.

明确你译文分段——两个段落之间用空格隔开（改为“将你译文以清晰段落形式展示——2段译文中间空开一行”），根据原文给重点词汇加粗或加下划线。